Friday, February 16, 2007

Knowing what to say before you figure out how to say it

Seems obvious doesn’t it? But in my years as a copywriter and content writer, and more critically as a content strategist, I am still surprised every time clients, managers, colleagues (or even myself), put down a 50-word line which has said absolutely nothing. Unfortunately, it happens more often than not.

Does this sound familiar...

You need to fill a page of content for a specific service offering or subject on which you have receive zero inputs, (and the net could only take you so far).

You sit in front of a screen with the heading typed in exactly the right font and color, below which are pasted 3-4 disconnected and unrelated sentences, which may or may not be related to your topic.

Then you start writing, or I as call it, ‘weaving’ together these sentences, and many adjectives later re-read a VERY long sentence, which may have fooled your teacher in high school, but will certainly get nowhere with your client.

Having taken this road several times myself, I’m now able to see whether I’m writing myself to a dead-end just before I get there. As a result, I’ve developed a little method to write myself out of that dark alley.

1. How many words do I need?
Believe me, knowing this often comes as a relief. The job of trying to write about something you know nothing about, within an ever reducing time frame, for people who seem to be the least cooperative, and yet, the most discerning, can tend to stress you out.

Realizing you only need 150-200 words (this is online writing) can take quite a load off your mind. If you’re handling a large document, do this section by section. Ask instead, how many words do I need for the introduction?

2. What do I know?
List it out. Even if its just the name of your client and the title of the page.

3. What is this page here?
Unfortunately answers like, “Because the f#$&*ing client wants it!” won’t get you anywhere. So try and see why the client wants this page. To project the company in a certain light? To reach out to a particular section of the audience? To place some information which simply doesn’t go anywhere else? There can be a dozen reasons. Knowing them will give you a new perspective.

4. What other information can I put in, that will satisfy the above reasons?
List it out. Skim through brochures or other popular web pages you know and see how the writer has handled it.

5. So what am I trying to say?
When you’re writing for a website you tend to build upon what you already know. You’ve understood the company, and therefore know the tone. You’ve read their brochures and talked to people, and therefore under their positioning. You’ve written the home page and perhaps a few overview pages, and so now you understand the technical levels of the content, or the layers of the company a little better than before.

But now you’re stuck. So take a step back. What do I want the company to say? Say in your mind, “I wanna say:” and then start typing. This is a conversation between you and an imaginary person on the other side of your screen. Start typing in simple short sentences, what you want them to know, why they need to know it, and what they should keep in mind at the end of it (the takeaway). Stop.

Take a look at your page. Now you have the meat.

6. Rewrite, and edit. Repeat as needed.

Works for me. Hope it helps you.

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